Age/Gender: 21, Male
Location: Pacific NW, USA
Job: Student/Musician
Grab the mic and seize the night.
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Exp. Points: 130 / 180
Exp. Rank #: 205,206
Voting Pow.: 3.75 votes
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129 Reviews | 95 w/ Responses
simple, yet beautiful. your singing voice, as has been stated, is wonderful, and the simple beat boxing plus bass humming is just... perfection. i feel like this is my christmas present.
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If this track were money, it would be ILLions of Euros.
Way to show off your insane skills here bruh.
Just wow.. fucking wow...
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"I won't budge to fit a mold or a meld
i'm more diseased the even deeper you delv, I need the speakers to tell"
^^This is called keepin it true. This whole track is amazing. I love the imagery and PROPER use of multisyllabic words.
Another fav line:
"I thought I'd cut my fuckin hand off while splittin cigars
And so I sit down all shitty while I write up some bars"
YES
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We need to do a track together.
I was pretty biased against this track because of the title, but you fucking destroyed, sir. I get what you're saying man, these mainstream 'artists' are just little pissants doing it for the money.
Only criticism is I think your verses could've been louder, and that "Fuck music" over and over gets pretty annoying...
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If you took off about the last second and a half of the track, I think it would actually loop. As is, any attempt to freestyle will be met with much frustration due to it not being perfectly on time. Good work, however.
Author's Response:
i kno some thing went wrong during the transfer but im uploading it again to day
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Other than the technical difficulties and the lacking length of this flow, this is pretty dope man. I love how you're developing your own style of rhyme scheming, and picking up more of that emotion. You're killing it man!
Author's Response:
One lesson you taught to me: Some songs take multiple takes. Sometimes it can take 100 takes to get it right. I've been practicing my lines everytime I can sit down and relax, then I record. Not getting frustrated while recording helps me keep in the zone. Thanks for dropping by, too bad you had to listen to my recent bullshit. I'd advise you to listen to "Logic" or "Of a coin", the lyrical content is definitely better than this nonsense.
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It's been a while since I've checked on ya man. I see you're learning those effects and getting their use down pretty well. I'd say look into a de-esser and a new microphone. It seems you're getting good enough at this trade to require some monetary investment. Good beat accompaniment, I'd say just compress your vocals a little more, so they can shine above the track, and maybe overdub? :D You're doing great man.
Author's Response:
Yah man, my lack of a microphone has forced me to start experimenting with effects, I try to keep it obvious where I use them though. I've already got a microphone picked out that I'll get myself as a welcome home present. Im cheap as shit, I know.
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![[Kiss Our Asses]](http://aicon.ngfiles.com/294000/294313.gif){kind=small}
and in the manner of my Sensei's teachings,
I can see that this song is waiting to be added onto. I like how you left it simple enough for the rest of us KOA members to get on it and collab with, from Haywire to yours truly.
Let's set this bitch off!
Author's Response:
lol i cant leave the MCs to dry
please tear this beat to shreds
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lyrics flow pretty smooth man. could be more complex in some places (fight/fright). and those effects kinda sound like SPM man... still... better than many here on NG
Author's Response:
thanks man, im glad you think so!
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Wow. Your lyrical content is amazing. The flow is 9.5 / 10. The problems here are just the effects you have on your voice make it sound really high and flat and it's really quiet behind the beat.
Absolutely amazing song otherwise.
Author's Response:
thanks, i'll try to fix that man, im glad you enjoyed it
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