You're engulfed in flames, sir
Amazing track. Only issues I had was your singing. You do it well, but you only show it at the end of the hook, so with the pauses it sounds kinda weak in the beginning which throws it off for me. Great flow, could've been longer, but sometimes an emcee's just gotta drop a short one, eh? Mayhap you're not used to doing Solo tracks?
5'd, DL'd, iPod'd
Thank you sir. I generally keep solo's short because I really don't have a lot of time, and hearing my own voice rapped over two verses and three choruses usually gets annoying to me, idk. I feel like one verse is sufficient for this one really, even though I'm sure many feel otherwise. I'm also trying to reach people that don't listen to hiphop that much as well, they usually don't have large attention spans.
Oh, and yeah, this is one of my first true tests of singing on a track. Glad you liked it for the most part lol. I appriciate your support. Stay up man.
Ingest a phallice
This shit is bomb.
Love the guitar sample.
hmmm
Linx did well, but seemed to lose his flwo at times. I think you just need better mic quality / noise-removal possibly. You sound really hollow Wyze.
Good job with all else though. I'm diggin the lyrics and message.
Ya, it does have a bit of a hollow sound. I'll see what I can do about that for the mixtaped version
Tell you what
This whole argument was started because electronic keyboards began to exist and interface with turntables. Before that, hip hop beats were specifically made from sampling other tracks and throwing a break beat on top, unless you had a live band to play anything.
Sampling is the most win art imaginable. If you can take a sound clip from something else (especially something your intended audience has heard) and give it a different story, a different feel, then you've made it a different piece of artwork entirely.
I hate to agree with Ses, but he's right about one thing. People need to get together and FIX this problem. If teh only way to do that is to get our own mainstream outlet (be it radio station or television channel) then that's what needs to happen. We need to bring REAL hip hop back in a big way.
But just talking about things won't get anything done. Let's start a hip hop movement to sweep the nation.
As always, good beat Delinquent. Not as busy as one is used to, but that made it easier to read the comments and with that as a base, really puts this piece into perspective.
Im not sure about the first paragraph
becouse War Spawn ahd Sirhc7000 are prime examples of people who dont use Turned Tables
yet they sample Profoundly and regularly
agree with second paragraph
Lol Ses is right in his own way and is also in the right direction. But my method isnt to make money off the music itself, Becouse Rap music is my family. i wouldnt sell my own fam. but this Video Game thing looks promicing.
and my beat kicks beasty ass u looser t(-.-)
:D
OMFG!!
This song roflpwns all faces. Seriously, omfg Delinquent... you're too amazing to exist as a human.
Therefore, I've come to the conclusion that you'ree actually a Music Android sent by aliens to infect our ears with utter awesomeness.
...so... much... win......
^_^
I don't like the pauses you've got going, kinda distracts, but I'm feelin the track.
Good choice on the beat, gettin better flowin. I'ma keep an eye on you now.
lol cool, I wanted 2 give the track this feeling, I like the way it came out=D anyway glad i got ya eye lol
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Wow
Damn man. I'm really feelin this. Your flow has gotten a LOT better. If you can bang out tracks like this, then you don't need to do disses.
5'd, DL'd, on the iPod
check out "happy days" and "I have this song..." too I'ma re-record so they're gna b better quality but I like em=D glad you liked it man
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
PS dissing is fun lmao, im up 4 a battle anytime=)
Now 101
Epic, as usual. I'm really shocked to hear something without samples from you. You do an amazing job.
I was surprised I hadn't added you as a fav.
Oh, and I'M known b/c of MickeyMao. Not the other way around. Lol.
Oh? LOL
i knew MickyMao Becouse of you
b4 u came along i never knew he existed
BTW i have 156 Fans b4 u faved me just now
ur fan # 157......God im hated T_T
War Spawn has over 400 fucking fans T_____T
Damn, Mike
Wow bro. You've been really insightful lately. Maybe it's just me recognizing your true nature, idk.
Anyway, this song is pretty aight. I personally think your snare is too low, (I want[ed?] to flow over it) and I can't hear any bass at all now, but dude... well... you know you've got skills mayn.
Keep churnin em out. I'll keep listening.
Awesome.
Ya, I need to get around to fixing the percussion. I'll try to do that later. Thanks for the kind words man
'People can't believe it'
Sure can't! Wtf Mickey? You're improving immensely! Looks like you had some positive influence on B-N too.
"I stole this mic" hahahahaaa
I think TRE should've spent more time on his 16. This isn't up to his potential. Never heard of Phr0zen, but.. is he 12? No hate, just... that's how he sounds.
As always, Wyze kills it.
FUCK YOUR HOOK THOUGH. Stop playing with effects bro. You don't need em... lol.
Stay up.
True story: I "borrowed" my first recording mic from Wal-Mart. I was experimenting on the effects on the hook (thats what learning is about), Im glad you think natural is better, I agree. Thanks for the words man, peace
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