Reason 4 > FL9
Just accept it. If you were to play the exact same melodies on Reason synths, this would sound way more pro. As is, they're really computerized. But maybe that's what you're going for.
So I have to ask you sir: Why are you using FL? Is it because Bill gave you AIDS?
Reason 4 cures AIDS.
O really?!?!
Zelda
Yup.
The verse sounds like some 8-bit Ocarina of Time background music on the steroids that your drums should have been taking.
Not my particular taste, but dl'ing anyway.
Oddly enough, this is a heavily modified guitar.
joooooooo
DIS IZ NOT TEH GANKSTA RAPPINZ DAT U IZ SUPPOSED TO DOO MAI NIKKANOG!!! WUH TEH FUXXX???
^_^
Decent
I'm actually surprised. This wasn't too bad. You're a pretty kosher freestyle artist, it would seem. Still need to work on 'finding your voice', but that can only come thru practice. You've got mad potential man. Keep it up.
Tips:
Background noise removal - Either turn down your mic sensitivity to cut out that excess white noise that makes it sound like you're rapping in your bedroom or use a plug in such as Noise Removal on Audacity.
Mixing: Look into Compression and Equalization. I think these two things will really help you out a lot and make your tracks sound exponentially better. Even if they're freestyles.
Wow.. a real Rapper gave me a 7 woo.
i understand.
As well as equalization i understand i will check it out and definitely use it fully.
It dos sound as if im rapping in my bedroom well kitchen but yeah hopefully i'll get a more realistic recording.
thanks a lot i believe i am good at freestyling and i'll continue with rapping and making proper tracks with you guys help.. thanks again.
-Chris
/bow
God. Damn. !.
You fuckin killlled this shit son. The change-ups in the flow of your delivery were oh so smooth. I think you prob destroyed this beat harder than I did.
Stay up fam
[KOA]poe
realism's finest
"I won't budge to fit a mold or a meld
i'm more diseased the even deeper you delv, I need the speakers to tell"
^^This is called keepin it true. This whole track is amazing. I love the imagery and PROPER use of multisyllabic words.
Another fav line:
"I thought I'd cut my fuckin hand off while splittin cigars
And so I sit down all shitty while I write up some bars"
YES
Thanx dude, I'm glad people on here appreciate poetic shyte
You and Me
We need to do a track together.
I was pretty biased against this track because of the title, but you fucking destroyed, sir. I get what you're saying man, these mainstream 'artists' are just little pissants doing it for the money.
Only criticism is I think your verses could've been louder, and that "Fuck music" over and over gets pretty annoying...
again not me lol im a producer only .. well i do a bit of scratching and mixing but not often enough to talk about
will keep you in mind for a collab im working on a few tracks right now but ill let you know when im free(er)
Close
If you took off about the last second and a half of the track, I think it would actually loop. As is, any attempt to freestyle will be met with much frustration due to it not being perfectly on time. Good work, however.
i kno some thing went wrong during the transfer but im uploading it again to day
In true KOA spirit
and in the manner of my Sensei's teachings,
I can see that this song is waiting to be added onto. I like how you left it simple enough for the rest of us KOA members to get on it and collab with, from Haywire to yours truly.
Let's set this bitch off!
eya
lyrics flow pretty smooth man. could be more complex in some places (fight/fright). and those effects kinda sound like SPM man... still... better than many here on NG
thanks man, im glad you think so!
I'm a hip hop philosopher from Spokane, Washington.
Age 34, Male
Musician, Promoter
Spokane, WA
Joined on 1/28/09
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