no subject
-1 for clipping on your take
-1 for mixing your vocals too loud on the beat
great lyrics for a hype track. pretty clear recording, no mumbles or chops. sounds pretty sick. good job here.
no subject
-1 for clipping on your take
-1 for mixing your vocals too loud on the beat
great lyrics for a hype track. pretty clear recording, no mumbles or chops. sounds pretty sick. good job here.
Amazing
I was confused about the flow of the verses as I was reading the lyrics, but once I caught it.... This song is really amazing.
I know your kind of smoking habits, and that's the reason that I'm attributing to this song being anything other than epic. I think with a bit more thought and planning, this could really go far. Your imagery and rhymes are wicked!
But I think the listener probably needs a break to kind of soak in what you just said and get ready for the verse to come. I'm just realizing this myself, but this is where Choruses come in.
Still, awesome song. Favorited.
Yea, I've been workin on hooks alot I usually just do an 8 bar for it. I can't sing for shit tho, so I just rapped the entire song ha, Real busy schedule now so when I had sumthin I just did it, I didn;t even have all of the lyriks written when I mixed and posted lol, then I deleted em HaHahah, smokein habits. Thanx for the shout, stay up
Gloine vs Exceptid
Honestly, I think this was a tie.
Cthulu continues to come with that crazy rhyme scheme and hard ass disses, though he sounds like he's just a small step above the 'reading it off a piece of paper' sound.
Exceptid had that insane energy and emotion with some equally lulzy cracks, but much of the time he wasn't rhyming.
As hypnotic stated, this competition isn't about mic quality or production value.
This is about WHO is the BEST EMCEE???
That being said:
Cthulu -
Content: 8/10
Rhythm: 7/10
Rhyme: 9/10
Delivery: 6/10
TOTAL: 30/40
Exceptid -
Content: 8/10
Rhythm: 7/10
Rhyme: 6/10
Delivery: 9/10
TOTAL: 30/40
I do have to say though, at the end of Cthulu's second verse it felt like he was trying to get a couple extra desperate punches in.
Mad gratz to all the emcees in the competition, and especially these two right here.
And just because this comp is about to be over doesn't mean anybody's gotta quit battlin!
word
had to dock you a beat for the beat choice. shit is hella fail.
but the lyrics are catchy and production is win.
keep them lyrics comin, fire your producer.
KOA
Awesome
Glad to be back in and have the competition continue. As was said, the only reason I dropped was to continue the battles.
Regardless, I've enjoyed all the battles so far, and I wish Gloine mad luck. Honestly he was the first emcee that has me trippin bout whether I'll win the battle or not. He's quite the emcee.
So, judges, vote, rate, download, and leave your vote!
We're both excited to see where this goes!
THANK YOU TINGTONGER & NGHH!!
[KOA]
if you don't win
nothing is right in the world.
mad gratz on this shit son.
keep it up.
thanks for the support man. i thought your clockwork orange rap was ill
god damn...
shit made me hella sad man
you did an amazing job here. i felt so much from this track; so much emotion, pain, sadness....
it's right on the level of Mr. Jones. i don't know what your background is that inspires these kinds of tracks, my friend, but it really hits home for me.
you did a really great job here.
keep up.
i lol'd
murdaa kinda fucked himself by making an intro on a battle track...
also, exceptid got this. he came with better lines and was more original than the 'YOU A HOMO' shit.
good battle
This is sick
Don't like the long intro, but this track is ill as fuck.
Also, I don't think your friend Shotty really went along with the topic... (Seems like a Lil Wayne wannabe)
But YOU did a really great job. Great concept.
Keep it hip hoppin.
2/5 says it all
Lol that was whack.
Eternal gets 4 points for the beat. You get none.
FAIL.
do i make you mad, or wut?
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Spokane, WA
Joined on 1/28/09