Amazing
I was confused about the flow of the verses as I was reading the lyrics, but once I caught it.... This song is really amazing.
I know your kind of smoking habits, and that's the reason that I'm attributing to this song being anything other than epic. I think with a bit more thought and planning, this could really go far. Your imagery and rhymes are wicked!
But I think the listener probably needs a break to kind of soak in what you just said and get ready for the verse to come. I'm just realizing this myself, but this is where Choruses come in.
Still, awesome song. Favorited.