Gasmasq's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[PJ - Lust]

nice

the only problem i have with this is that the guitar on the verses gets repetitive. but i like the simplicity. you could maybe just switch it up or add like one more element to give it some differentiation.

PoyzenJam responds:

yeah i agree with the melody. thanks for the review man

[Kazmo - Dark Chase]

This is pretty epic

The fade you have going on with the main instrument really brings life to this track. If it stayed the same throughout, it would get bland and boring rather quickly. But you introduced some trance elements into this and took a totally different approach to DnB than I've ever heard.

When the high melodies come in (around 1:25) it totally reshapes the journey of the tracks progression and gives it a lot more spice.

I agree with lordxitachi. This doesn't last long enough.

-1 because I think your drums could be busier. You have a couple relatively small change ups, but nothing impressive.

-0 Since you're not a DnB artist normally, so I won't dock you for not dl'ing new samples to slice from for your drums.

4.34 / 5.00 (+ 0.0020)

[Sting - Resume]

Reason 4 > FL9

Just accept it. If you were to play the exact same melodies on Reason synths, this would sound way more pro. As is, they're really computerized. But maybe that's what you're going for.

So I have to ask you sir: Why are you using FL? Is it because Bill gave you AIDS?

Reason 4 cures AIDS.

Blasphem-E responds:

O really?!?!

[Sting - Launch Our Hopes Away]

Zelda

Yup.
The verse sounds like some 8-bit Ocarina of Time background music on the steroids that your drums should have been taking.

Not my particular taste, but dl'ing anyway.

Blasphem-E responds:

Oddly enough, this is a heavily modified guitar.

[WS - Dropping Knowledge]

joooooooo

DIS IZ NOT TEH GANKSTA RAPPINZ DAT U IZ SUPPOSED TO DOO MAI NIKKANOG!!! WUH TEH FUXXX???

^_^

war-spawn responds:

*mumble mumble mumble mumble*

Translation : I mumble when I rap.

[[MC Crispy] - Real Times]

Decent

I'm actually surprised. This wasn't too bad. You're a pretty kosher freestyle artist, it would seem. Still need to work on 'finding your voice', but that can only come thru practice. You've got mad potential man. Keep it up.

Tips:
Background noise removal - Either turn down your mic sensitivity to cut out that excess white noise that makes it sound like you're rapping in your bedroom or use a plug in such as Noise Removal on Audacity.

Mixing: Look into Compression and Equalization. I think these two things will really help you out a lot and make your tracks sound exponentially better. Even if they're freestyles.

chrisG755 responds:

Wow.. a real Rapper gave me a 7 woo.

i understand.

As well as equalization i understand i will check it out and definitely use it fully.
It dos sound as if im rapping in my bedroom well kitchen but yeah hopefully i'll get a more realistic recording.

thanks a lot i believe i am good at freestyling and i'll continue with rapping and making proper tracks with you guys help.. thanks again.

-Chris

[SH - Stay Together]

your snares

are not hard enough for hip hop. just fyi.

cool sample

[ROF - We gonna find you]

Artist reviews:

Lejin: You killed it. Glad you're alive. No advice here.

Hyliss: Voice sounds really tinny, like you're rapping into a tin can. Compress more.

Rav-iLL: Love the energy, but you're clipping in a couple spots, and when your voice craps, I feel like I'm listening to an emo track. Check your input levels before you hit the mic with those loud ass dubs.

King Cajete: Your EQing sounds like you haven't hit puberty, which makes your lyrics lack sincerity. Experiment with your equalizer til you find something a little more fitting.

~Just keeping it real~

[KOA]
poe

[KOA (R)]

/bow

God. Damn. !.
You fuckin killlled this shit son. The change-ups in the flow of your delivery were oh so smooth. I think you prob destroyed this beat harder than I did.

Stay up fam
[KOA]poe

RemixF2D responds:

i wanna hear your version man. KOA is takin over. Stay up! =)

~Rymix

[Big Red - Ain't No Sunshine]

Ae-may-ZING!!!

simple, yet beautiful. your singing voice, as has been stated, is wonderful, and the simple beat boxing plus bass humming is just... perfection. i feel like this is my christmas present.