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[Wyze+Gas - Spirits]

WE WILL

get this done. i just found the lyrics on a jump drive yesterday. i'm thinking of recording it in the studio, just for you. eh?

we've got a good start though. let's finish this up asap.

stay up bruh.

Blasphem-E responds:

For sure dude. Even though I haven't had time to record in a while either. Let's definitely push this, and everything else for that matter lol.

Keep doing you, and congrats again on the deal

[Terrorstorm]

Alex Jones

Is an idiot. He takes what start out as facts and twists and manipulates them into conspiracies for fame and money, just like every other capitalist here. YES, our govt was responsible for 9/11. But the way Alex Jones talks about it, he would convince one that our own mothers played a part in it.

Really, we all did by letting these fucks run our lives, but honestly, Alex Jones just needs to calm the fuck down.

Good track anyway...

423Records responds:

HAHAH I respect that and your opinion brother thanks for the comment and for speaking your mind!

[The Coalition for Life]

Uh...

I like the social awareness in your songs, but your voice seems like you should be doing some kind of punk-esque indie rock. Don't get it twisted, I like the song, and the topic, but yeah... sorry. The backing music takes away from your message, I feel.

I'm pro-abortion btw. Not pro-choice. PRO ABORTION!!! lol. We need a new method of population control. Abortion's where it's at.

[13 Great losses]

Advice

Interesting melody. I suppose it definitely coincides with your author comments.

Your drums are definitely too low for my taste, and the use of the chimes (is that what they are?)... idk. I'm not sure if that's a tom you threw in there (see 1:49) for the quarter hit, but... well... I don't want to hear it. At least, not as much as I currently am...

It seems like you just kinda picked random sounds for this.

Good melody though. No doubt about that.

Drewsky13 responds:

Much thanks man

[Hip hop wont stop]

Ummmm...

I understand that a lot of other people are diggin the hell out of this track, so maybe there's something in it that I'm missing, but, well:

Flow seems off. Yours and Baf's. You know you're supposed to end your bar on the snare, right?

At 2:38 there's a double snare like you sampled the verse loop incorrectly.

The chorus sounds distorted, possibly due to incorrect overdubbing or you breaking 0db on your mic. It also doesn't seem to flow very well along the beat.

At many points, I'm confronted by the fact that you're rhyming ones (1 syllable at the end of the bar rhymes). Try working on your multi's.
Also, it seems that a lot of the time, you're not rhyming at all. For example, "swingin / trippin", or "need it / addicted". Some artists can pull it off, and you might be one, but I'm just not feeling it here.

Rooby seems to draw out his words quite a bit, which takes away from the song in general. Also, it sounds like he hasn't spent much time on the mic, due to his lack of comfortability and use of his diaphragm.

Decent beat.

Madwigged responds:

Damn dude.
I always appreciate some feedback, but everytime i get gassed about havin a new review, and i see its yours it just ruins it. Regardless of your opinion, which you are welcome to of course, it just always negative and shit. I mean thats cool, im just sayin that you dont seem to like my shit, or my style, or my rhyming schemes, or even the lyrics. Thats cool though, i guess i woulda just stop listening to me, but your hanging in there. Haha, thanks again for the review.

P.S.: The need it/addicted thing is part of an ABAB rhyme scheme.

[Reach for the Stars [7000]]

Timing

Seems to get fucked around :40. Perhaps I'm wrong, but that sinking feeling you're talking about? I'm getting it.
I don't think it's the drums though. I think it's the sample, that just needs some moving around.
D: sry

[Yun+WS - Amen]

Fucking KNEW IT

WHO THE FUCK SAMPLED DELINQUENT?
lol or maybe it's just the same sample
Regardless, I knew I'd heard this beat before. I went through WS's shit on my iPod and couldn't find it, and I was SURE it was a Deli beat, and that I'd used it at a show before, but I was like "It couldn't be?" but it is, indeed, Delinquent's Never Pray with some extra bells and shakers on it.
Please tell me, WTF is all this about?
-1 for not doing it as well as Delinquent
-1 for the mis-labeling.
IF I'm incorrect on this matter, then disregard this review.

YunVeroz responds:

Our track was posted on 5/09/2008.
Delinquent's track was posted on 03/24/2009.

You do the math. >_>

[WS - 2 Step]

Superb

It seems like Sham's dubs are a tad off, but Liquid killed it, as did you, Spawn. Did you make the beat? Arez's verse is pretty simple, not really my taste.

Overall, quite enjoyable.

Take this track out the oven, it's HOT!

war-spawn responds:

It took Sham a few hours to record his verse, because shit was pretty much everywhere. Also, the beat is from El-P called 'The Death of Chris Palko.'

[Wyze+KB - MC Burial(ayzee diss]

tsss it's hot off the griddle

Had to drop a point because of your inconsistencies between verses. On the first and last, you're more yourself, but the middle two you're soundin like some horror-core shit, which I think fucks up your delivery.

Don't get it twisted though, I've yet to see a diss track on NG that's this hard (including mine). You fucking destroyed lyrically, but as usual, your multi-take, multi-style fucks with my listening experience.

Mad props to Bill on this one as well. That was a gorgeous hook, and the mixing was 98% top notch. (Still, I gotta rep for my EAST COAST lol)

El musica esta muy bueno!

Blasphem-E responds:

Lmao, weren't you from Spokane? How's that East Coast? And if I remember right as well, you were in the south before that, not the east. But I may be wrong.. Probably am lol.

Ya, you're like the 5th person to tell me not to do that growl shit. I should probably cut that out in future.

I'll try to be more consistent for all future tracks, but I can't guarantee one take. However, I can try to keep it to the one sound.

Bill killed the hook and mixing, that's for sure.

Glad you liked it overall though man. Well, if the score is any indication haha

[Wyze + Gas - My Friend]

Word @ da Wyze

Lovin the lyrics as usual here mayn. Really though, I wish you wouldn't get so frustrated when you're recording, and could just sit, chill, and take a deep breath before you record so you can drop it in one take. Regardless, you really added a different feel to this song. You took the sort of "plot" and created the logical continuation.
"My breath, naw fuck you, it no longer flows
And if I die tonight you'll have to deal with my ghost"
Fucking awesome man.

I don't KADIEEx just made it obvious that she doesn't know wtf she's talking about, because I'm pretty sure she mistook me for you. I don't think I'm actually nasally? (DENY DENY DENY NOOOOOOOOOOOES!! lol) Silly little 16 year olds get SO pissy when you correct them eh?

lol make sure that drill's turned on when you fuck her and her boyfriend with it haha

Blasphem-E responds:

lol, she was just pissy because I called her an elementary school retard or something similar.

And haven't I explained to you why I don't do shit in one take? I've got that trachial stinosis, so if I were to do that, my breaths (which aren't actually bigger than anyone elses) would come out MUCH louder than anyone elses.

Also, the line was "My Friend, nah fuck you, we're no longer close", but that works too :D

Good working with you again man