Considerable!
3.98 / 5.00 (+ 0.23)
I like this, although it seems like some of the counter melodies don't particularly match, which in turn, gives it it's own flair.
Very asian-esque.
Seems a little busy though at times...
Considerable!
3.98 / 5.00 (+ 0.23)
I like this, although it seems like some of the counter melodies don't particularly match, which in turn, gives it it's own flair.
Very asian-esque.
Seems a little busy though at times...
Ya, I've noticed a bit of that. I'll see what I can do about it
can't wait for final product
3.11 / 5.00 (+ 0.073)
You've got FL, so you could totally throw something behind those stops, like another melody... idk if you've thought of that yet... good work so far. like i said, can't wait for final!
Ya, I'm tempted to do that, still working at it though
Not enough drums
And the melody's a little simple, but for an hour, nice job.
I suppose. Thanks for the comment. =]
Othello = Old School
This song = Win. I'm totally diggin the summarization. What did your teacher have to say? lol
Your vocals could be a tad louder tho.
Well, my legit teacher had back surgery, so we got a very laid-back supply for a couple months... and she actually rofl'd. It was awesome :D
Lyricism not required?
Hmm it's alright. Good beat, needs eq'ing and normalizing. Your vocals are overpowering the whole track.
Also, I really hate autotuned shit so I may not be having an objective opinion.
Oh, future reference, don't 5 your own tracks. It looks bad.
lyrics r not that dumb down more punchlines than anything, also i dont need to 5 my tracks ive had top 5 before i dnt care really but i stated above that this was premastered but thx for the review
im remixing
If you don't mind. i'ma throw a piece on this and PM you with it.
You need to remove the background noise though. A program like Audacity will allow you to do this. Also, maybe try overdubbing and normalizing.
I added you on MSN man. And ya, I'm aware of that, but taking too much ruins my voice quality.
Damn!
There's definitely going to be some competition going on for that Italy spot if tracks like this are getting posted!
Gratz on the hard work and good luck!
wow! thanks so much! i really put alot of work into it, so it will be fun to see how everything turns out! thanks so much for the listen and the nice review! <3
Only thing...
I'm totally distracted by whatever that is panning back and forth. At least that's what it sounds like it's doing. The ambient strumming sound... Idk.
Yeah so i think you're talking about the organ I used. It's really weird and plays unevenly to the left and right. Lol, yeah this beat is not really that good. I doubt i'll even work on it. Guitars just don't sound good at all unless they're live, or used by someone who can tweak the fuck out of it... Or if they use Ministry of Rock *drools in his pants* I want it so bad. lmao. anyways thanks for the review.
Can I record on this?
Damn bro this is phat as fuck. We should definitely work together.
feel free !
Sweet
I'm diggin the subject matter, but as these other cats have already said, it doesn't seem like you have much presence. This is something that comes with time, but when an artist is monotone for a whole track, it just sounds like they're bored.
You've got some similarities in your voice (the way you've got that reverb, and some effect I would assume) with South Park Mexicans. That kinda throws me off, but your wit definitely shows that you are your own artist.
This track is much better than Party Hardy in my opinion.
Thanks for the words man. The reveb is probally me singing in the background, I felt like experiementing with the sound. Now that I listen to it, it does kinda sound like South Park Mexicans, hahah! Good ear!
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