Very moving
Wow. Your lyrical content is amazing. The flow is 9.5 / 10. The problems here are just the effects you have on your voice make it sound really high and flat and it's really quiet behind the beat.
Absolutely amazing song otherwise.
Very moving
Wow. Your lyrical content is amazing. The flow is 9.5 / 10. The problems here are just the effects you have on your voice make it sound really high and flat and it's really quiet behind the beat.
Absolutely amazing song otherwise.
thanks, i'll try to fix that man, im glad you enjoyed it
Apology accepted
Cool beat choice and you're okay at freestyling, I'll give you that.
What kind of mic are you recording with? If you can get a pop filter, that would be best. If not, nylon and a hanger works. Also, you need to amplify your vocals before you compress them, then EQ all that extra bass out.
Yo thanks. I have a computer mic. Ya see i dotn do the stuff 24/7. i have a skill. i wnana get noticed, but money is the problem.lol
Whoa
Idgaf what this guy below me says, this track is ill. It's so peaceful and tranquil. Definitely a change for you, but I like this a lot (hence the 10).
Glad you thought so dude. Ya, I thought it was fairly peaceful as well
w00t
Very Sting. The drum line is muy bueno mi compadre. Putting in all that work makes much better tracks.
Ya, that was a LOT of work for those drums lol
Har har har!!1
I can just imagine some movie having this as the backing music for Jesus carrying a cross thru the streets and gettin beaten with shit then hanging on the cross. Idk... that's the imagery.
really does an amazing job at setting a feeling and tone. muchos props. i'd actually give you an 11 for this if i could.
They'd be beating him with a copy of Mel Gibson's Passion of the Christ. Delicious irony.
Lyyyyyyrrrrrrr
If you didn't make this within your 7 day period, then you just cheated.
Also, it's mastered too low. Only issue.
Fine, I'll release something else tonight. One second, just finishing up what was supposed to be tomorrows... way to add to my workload
Yeeeah!!
This is crackin bud! I don't know where this came from, but you definitely stepped your game up with this track. The reverb on the drums is the only thing that I had to drop you a point for. It just gets to me, in that your kick and snare are overpowered by your hat.
Regardless, great melody, cool line in the hook, overall a stellar track.
Thanks for the review, problem fixed
Psy-esque?
Not something I'd personally rap over. The melody gets really repetitive and doesn't seem to have a whole lot of character to it. Also, the 1, 2 drum beat was mediocre at best imho.
Yes, it's quite simplistic. Thought I'd go for a change
So-so
Your drums seem off in spots and your synths switch around too much for my taste. Seems a little too ADD. However, this is definitely a good start at some Psychedelic Hip Hop. I like the sound of that extra reverb-ed snare on top of your main snare every few bars. Sounds really good.
Class is starting or I'd write more.
ah K. Ya, this had no real form, I put what I wanted, where I wanted. But ya, I liked that snare sound as well
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